Samples from the Word Spa

Fewer words, shorter words, sharper words: that's a Word Spa massage.

Business report, before Word Spa:
"Increase resource allocation to the most value-intensive projects."

AFTER Word Spa:
"Spend the most effort on the best-paying work."

Fund-raising letter, before Word Spa:
"Seeking to expand into additional and renovate existing space, we envision a venue that can consistently attract established performers and substantially more listeners, as well as much better accommodate our acting school, Playwrights for Youth program, and Musical Theater History Project, all the while continuing to provide an avenue for musical talent today to develop into the integral performers of tomorrow."

AFTER Word Spa:
"We turn 50 next year, and we're living a new dream: adding a grand new stage, after-school master classes for local kids, and an archive of classic scripts and scores that will turn us into a vibrant center of American musical theater."

Thank-you note, before Word Spa:
"I want to personally express my gratitude for your efforts and enthusiasm that made the Hansen Park celebrations this past weekend a success. You should be proud of the impact created from the celebratory events. From greeting, being tour guides, and helping everyone, your efforts were key in the positive experience of the thousands of people who visited over the course of the many events."

AFTER Word Spa:
"Thank you for helping with the Hansen Park celebration last weekend. An amazing 3000 people watched the ribbon cutting on Friday and came to the open house the next day. You greeted, served drinks, led tours, pointed the way, and left everyone feeling great about their visits."

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